MAD EYES

[Dave]

Serial review, as I reread..........

This is the one that inspired the flying green snakes in the movie.

A gripping first chapter, very mysterious, deasigned to pull you in.
Things keep getting weirder and weirder. I'm around page 50, and
staryting to wonder is this coincidence, or levels of plots turns that
will be revealed.

I remembered early on that this was a ghosted DOC, and it is, the next-
to-last Donovan, in between LAND OF LONG JUJU and the totally awful HE
COULD STOP THE WORLD. Donovan can't write dialogue for DOC; it just
doesn't sound right. DOC only ha a few hundred words of dialogue in
most stories anyway, but Donovan consistantly hits the wrong notes
right from the start. So I figure that very soon the logic train will
leave the station, and the wheels will start coming off. But so far,
so good.

dave

[Dave]

SPOLIER ALERT







Is my face red? I Had forgotten that the is the DOC where the bad
guys get an actor to double for DOC. No wonder he doesn't sound right
-- it isn't him.
dave

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Post by Dave
Serial review, as I reread..........
This is the one that inspired the flying green snakes in the movie.
A gripping first chapter, very mysterious, deasigned to pull you in.
Things keep getting weirder and weirder. I'm around page 50, and
staryting to wonder is this coincidence, or levels of plots turns that
will be revealed.
I remembered early on that this was a ghosted DOC, and it is, the next-
to-last Donovan, in between LAND OF LONG JUJU and the totally awful HE
COULD STOP THE WORLD. Donovan can't write dialogue for DOC; it just
doesn't sound right. DOC only ha a few hundred words of dialogue in
most stories anyway, but Donovan consistantly hits the wrong notes
right from the start. So I figure that very soon the logic train will
leave the station, and the wheels will start coming off. But so far,
so good.
dave

Flying Green Snakes come from The Mystic Mullah.

:))